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Author Topic: CROCADILE TEARS...THOUGHTS AND CHANGED THAT YOU WOULD MAKE>>>??  (Read 2563 times)
Secretlies
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« on: June 19, 2011, 09:38:30 PM »
WHAT CHANGES WOULD YOU YOURSELF MAKE IF YOU WERE RIGHTING THIS!!???Smiley
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big_fan
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« Reply #1 on: June 22, 2011, 12:01:30 PM »
CT, hmmm.... maybe at the beginning where they fall in to the lake, i would've made AR lose conciseness after surfacing.... not really sure.
actually i probably won't make any changes to CT. it was almost perfect.
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luke8889
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^^it's awesome^^
« Reply #2 on: June 22, 2011, 04:16:16 PM »
It's funny how ash is with Alex on the mission. Have you read the short story ***spoilers** forgot the name.  grin were ash kills Alex's parents because he works for  scorpia  grin
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Ayo, and to anybody i thought about going at, it was nothing personal
just some s*** I was going through
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-Enimen Talkin' 2 Myself. feat Kobe
big_fan
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« Reply #3 on: June 23, 2011, 10:37:29 AM »
you got the books mixed up... Ash is in Snake Head smiley
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alexcub1
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What're you lookin' at???
« Reply #4 on: June 23, 2011, 11:00:15 PM »
I wouldn't make it as creepy, I mean like the kidnapping.
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luke8889
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^^it's awesome^^
« Reply #5 on: June 26, 2011, 08:54:02 AM »
whoops cry
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Ayo, and to anybody i thought about going at, it was nothing personal
just some s*** I was going through
And to anybody else:  I'M BACK   
-Enimen Talkin' 2 Myself. feat Kobe
big_fan
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« Reply #6 on: June 27, 2011, 11:21:55 PM »
dude! the kidnapping was like the best part (OK it's not the best, but one of the best)it was pretty cool how they manage to fool all the authorities drugging Alex and making him look like he had mental problems. grin
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alexcub1
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« Reply #7 on: July 02, 2011, 01:00:26 AM »
Quote from: big_fan on June 27, 2011, 11:21:55 PM
dude! the kidnapping was like the best part (OK it's not the best, but one of the best)it was pretty cool how they manage to fool all the authorities drugging Alex and making him look like he had mental problems. grin
Okay, yeah, it was great for a book.  But what if some psycho reads that and actually does it?  I mean it's creepy that someone might actually think of it, or try it.
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Harry looked a little put out, but had to agree. "Nobody's as cool as Alex Rider."  ~ from bingo's "The Longest Short Story Ever"
Secretlies
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« Reply #8 on: July 05, 2011, 03:11:41 AM »
ya that was funny when they kidnapped him. I love when he get kidnapped its just so funny!:)
Wasnt my favourite book thou!
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alexcub1
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« Reply #9 on: July 07, 2011, 09:14:08 PM »
Wasn't my favorite book either!
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Harry looked a little put out, but had to agree. "Nobody's as cool as Alex Rider."  ~ from bingo's "The Longest Short Story Ever"
TiggsRulz:)
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« Reply #10 on: July 08, 2011, 01:18:50 AM »
The kidnapping part was pretty memorable, you have to admit!!
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alexcub1
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« Reply #11 on: July 11, 2011, 12:14:01 AM »
Quote from: TiggsRulz:) on July 08, 2011, 01:18:50 AM
The kidnapping part was pretty memorable, you have to admit!!
yep
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Harry looked a little put out, but had to agree. "Nobody's as cool as Alex Rider."  ~ from bingo's "The Longest Short Story Ever"
AlexRiderFan2012
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« Reply #12 on: July 12, 2012, 02:39:04 AM »
[/b I honestly thought Crocodile Tears was really good but the kidnapping was a bit stupid I mean come on Myra Beckette did a awful job on Alex's hair clearly she can't cut hair for the world. But i thought it was funny when Alex told her to go rot in hell and the Crocodiles ate her! Gotta love nature.  grin
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