If Alex Really Died...

[Tai]

scorpia.

[MadCatta]

Tai, please don't just have a single word in a post...

It would be great. We could have a scene:
Alex Rider woke up. He saw his mum and dad and he looked down. He saw he was standing on clouds. He saw Yassen smiling at him for the first itme, then................
He slipped and fell, and fell and fell until he reached the earth and splatted

...Bit graphic, with the "splatted" ... I'm sure "He slipped and fell." would suffice...

[perthy25]

He fell down to the ground. Once he reached the ground his painful screams of terror were extinguished, only to be replaced with a horrible ghostly moaning sound. His bones were shattered, one of them went into his lungs. His eyes, which and both landed on pebbles, bursted into blood, fluid and flesh. His skull was cracked; blood was seeping out slowly from a huge gash when he got hit by his flick knife when he fell down. At last, he screamed a final time, then lay still.

This better?
( SARCASM)

[MadCatta]

Well, not really. 'Cause I'm sure he'd be too er, too dead, to make that final scream. And how did his flick-knife hit him in the head? Surely it was in his pocket?
xD

[big_fan]

He fell down to the ground. Once he reached the ground his painful screams of terror were extinguished, only to be replaced with a horrible ghostly moaning sound. His bones were shattered, one of them went into his lungs. His eyes, which and both landed on pebbles, bursted into blood, fluid and flesh. His skull was cracked; blood was seeping out slowly from a huge gash when he got hit by his flick knife when he fell down. At last, he screamed a final time, then lay still.

This better?
( SARCASM)

i like it. it is sooo bloody and grusome.

[MadCatta]

The wind howled and the rain poured down. The grey concrete held many a puddle, one of which was attacked as Alex Rider ran through it. The assassin followed swiftly, sprinting across the rooftop. He needn't have; Alex was at the edge. And there was no where else to run. The assassin grinned. Alex knew his time was up. The assassin stepped forward. Alex leaned back automatically. He lost his footing. Alex Rider, teenage superspy, the ultimate weapon, plummeted towards the ground, his scream lost in the wind. He hit the ground on his front. Each rib broke on impact, piercing his lungs. His spine cracked and his internal organs collapsed from the force. His head didn't do much better; his neck snapped and his nose was the first to be crushed. His skull had cracked hard on the pavement below. His legs were in positions no ordinary man could put them in.

The assassin looked over the edge to see the remains of the young boy who'd outfoxed so many people. Job done.
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...Wow... I know why you wrote that one... it's really fun!! xD

[perthy25]

That would be the perfect ending.

[big_fan]

i'm with you there. pretty darn awsome. i f you can squeez in a bit more grusome description it would be even better.

[perthy25]

Then it would be 18+rated. Now we can include references to bad and dirty stuff
Also, use guns next time.

[Tai]

Then it would be 18+rated. Now we can include references to bad and dirty stuff
Also, use guns next time.

YES!!!!

[perthy25]

Alex drew out his fully automatic Beowulf carbine. (the Beowulf is a fully automatic M4 which fires .50 caliber rounds.) he took aim, then fired the whole magazine in 1 whole burst. The gun, after the firing, broke down. No matter, Alex thought. The victims were now unrecognizable. Blood was all over their bodies, and there were hands and legs everywhere.

Alex suddenly became shocked and depressed, not be use of the brutal killing, but he wanted to see his dad again.

Random I know.

[big_fan]

wow u r evil...... but that is AWSOME . i would turn it around a bit though, has the assains spraying bullets in to AR

[perthy25]

Mix it with MadCatta's

[Alice Rider]

It's nice seeing Alex with guns, it makes him look cooler.

But him dying and becoming splat? Not so cool...

[perthy25]

Awww.........splat is fun. Torture is fun. Guns are fun.