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Author Topic: Alex Rider Flaws  (Read 3393 times)
Sabina Pleasure
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« on: October 11, 2008, 02:30:58 AM »
I love Alex rider but want to show Horowitz that he needs to profread his books more. These are some of the ones that i noticed if you find any more please post them here.
1. in stormbreaker wolf jumps alone.  before Alex joined k unit there were four people there.  wolf would only have jumped alone if Alex had jumped in which case he would not have been there to force wolf to jump
2.in ark angle Alex cuts the bars on the cell one at a time.he could have cut the bars faster or, just cut the bar that has the lock on it.

Please don't hate me l love Alex too.
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I am no just some weird crazy Alex penifer fan.  Alex does rule though.  There needs to be more violence in the books. i only picked the name Sabina to show that even girls like Alex RIDER
DilanMelis
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« Reply #1 on: October 11, 2008, 06:33:45 AM »
No, those comments are fair. No one will hate you because of it =]
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Rayray. M
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« Reply #2 on: October 30, 2008, 09:06:52 AM »
There is lots of flaws in stormbreaker but as i don't have there book with me so i can't be specific
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« Reply #3 on: October 31, 2008, 12:26:31 PM »
i think wolf had a partner. because wolf hesitated he jumped before him so therfor wolf was alone. id tell you exactly what it says but i dont have the book with me. but i know that wolf pretended to struggle with his gear or something like that, and because, im guesing, they were meant to jump at a certain time his partner jump wether he was with him or not.
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« Reply #4 on: October 31, 2008, 03:44:44 PM »
yeah, it says that wolfs partner goes first without him...

and in skeleton key, the guy is called Tom Turner but he also gets called Taylor.... is that a mistake or just something that is confusing and i cant get?
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Rayray. M
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« Reply #5 on: October 31, 2008, 05:52:35 PM »
mistake i noticed that too
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« Reply #6 on: October 31, 2008, 05:54:18 PM »
ahh, good. i got soo confused about that. and in Necropolis there are mistakes too, it says "day" when its meant to say "say". just thought everyone wanted to know.....
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Rayray. M
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« Reply #7 on: October 31, 2008, 05:56:44 PM »
well even the best make mistakes MC
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« Reply #8 on: October 31, 2008, 05:58:45 PM »
but they're meant to be checked by others..... i bet you are getting ready to say "he's only human".

anyway, BOT
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Rayray. M
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« Reply #9 on: October 31, 2008, 05:59:29 PM »
Quote from: MadCatta on October 31, 2008, 05:58:45 PM
but they're meant to be checked by others..... i bet you are getting ready to say "he's only human".

anyway, BOT
He is only human anyway Bot........ eh..................
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blondebaka
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« Reply #10 on: November 01, 2008, 08:18:32 AM »
yeah but the whole piont of editors is to find the errors and take things out they dont think work... but it happens all the time lol
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« Reply #11 on: November 01, 2008, 01:20:49 PM »
must be pretty cool to be an editor.... except for the proofreading bit....
BOT
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« Reply #12 on: November 02, 2008, 05:34:33 AM »
Ditto. Try to keep on topic guys.
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alex_obesser123
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« Reply #13 on: November 07, 2008, 07:17:13 PM »
yeah, i think he could have done a better job proofreading, no offense, anthony!!!!!
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« Reply #14 on: November 08, 2008, 04:11:19 AM »
Alex Rider is the best person...................ever




no flaws.....
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