heres a great one my friend wrote!
Emma was sitting and crying on the bench with people wandering what has happened to her. Even though people wanted to know what is wrong with her, they didn’t ask because she might think they are being nosey. She should be starting to walk home now but she doesn’t want to. She has had a bad day and doesn’t want to talk and see anyone. Her boyfriend Joe had just dumped her. He went to the same school as her and was in the same class. It started this morning when Joe rang Emma on her mobile and asked her if she wanted to go shopping. Emma has been going out with him for the last few months. They never have had a meal together since they first came together. All they do together is just walk around town to do some shopping. Emma would always reply with a yes because she loves spending time with Joe and she believes life is for living. She never says no to any offer even if it is a dare. They both agreed that Emma would meet him at his house by lunchtime so by the time it reached lunchtime she had a relaxing bath, got dressed, put on makeup, grabbed a snack from the shop around the corner and now she was knocking on his door. Usually it takes about five minutes for someone to answer the door but today was different. It was as if she could tell that something horrible was going to happen. She usually feels happy when she gets to his house but she felt as if she was in a war. Someone answered the door before Emma had the chance to knock at the door again. Usually she has to knock at the door a couple of times. Whenever she is there, there is music playing loud but today there is none playing.
‘What are you doing here?’ It was Joe’s mum who answered the door. She was wearing matching blue clothes. Blue trousers, a blue jacket and blue trainers. Her zip on her jacket was revealing a white t-shirt underneath. ‘Here to mess up more of my son’s lives are you? Well soon he will realise your ture colours and he will leave you!’
‘Just to get your facts right. He phoned me to come here not the other way round.’
Usually it would be the other way round. Emma would ring Joe up.
‘Well he must want to leave you if he rang you this early. You might as well leave now and save yourself the heartache. Oh yeah I forgotten you don’t have a heart!’
‘I can’t understand why he fell in love with you anyway.’
She could see a figure in the corner. It suddenly moved to the door. The figure was wearing dark blue jeans with a blue shirt. His blue shirt had the words ‘Cool Dude’ in white. He also was looking as if he hadn’t had a wash for days and he stank but that didn’t bother Emma because all that matters is personality to Emma. Joe always seemed perfect when it came to personality.
‘Mum I can’t believe you can say them words’ Joe sounded surprised to hear them words coming out of his mum’s mouth even though she says that line evrytime Emma comes.
‘But dear you don’t know her true colours. She is only after you for money!’ Emma is never after his money. As far as she is concern she has got money so she doesn’t need anymore. By the time she finished shouting, Joe and Emma were half way down the street.
